Naruto of Pirate World

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1. done

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2. "When I watched the Pirates, I played the Naruto game, but because I was an African, I threw my phone in anger" Lol

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3. 𝐒𝐢𝐭𝐞 𝐰𝐢𝐭𝐡 𝐌𝐓𝐋 𝐭𝐡𝐚𝐭 𝐝𝐨𝐞𝐬 𝐧𝐨𝐭 𝐞𝐱𝐢𝐬𝐭 𝐡𝐞𝐫𝐞 : 𝐦𝐭𝐥𝐟𝐚𝐧𝐟𝐢𝐜.𝐜𝐨𝐦

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4. I had thought it was an original one piece fanfic, and in some cases it really is, but it started with a pretty good mc, but the more time passes the more the author turns him into an idiot and makes him look more and more like luffy, but at the same time very far from being as good as a real luffy. Also, the fanfic follows the whole journey of the original adventure of one piece, the worst the mc meets all that luffy and his crew to meet but 2 years in advance, which is extremely bizarre and can be original. basically it's a version for dummies, for the moment we haven't seen anything new, it's just a copy paste of one piece with another mc and with a system. and talk about the system, the author uses it less and less, I'm at 109 chapters and the last time I saw the system was 40 or 50 chapters ago... and the last point that annoys me the most is the fact that the mc explains these abilities to everyone each time, without saying that it can put him in danger... like controlling others with these eyes ... in short, a good start, then when he took robin as a crew, the novel begins to fall, the mc has changed at this time and becomes more and more stupid (the author wants to make him look like luffy, but does very bad) 2*/5*

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5. I hate Nami in this story, ungratefull bastard.

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