Divine System of the Strongest Card Supplier in the End Times (Doomsday Strongest Cards Supplier)

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1. 𝐃𝐢𝐬𝐜𝐨𝐯𝐞𝐫𝐲 𝐨𝐟 𝐚 𝐬𝐢𝐭𝐞 𝐰𝐢𝐭𝐡 𝐨𝐧𝐥𝐲 𝐑-𝟏𝟖 𝐍𝐨𝐯𝐞𝐥: 𝐧𝐨𝐯𝐞𝐥𝐫𝟏𝟖.𝐜𝐨𝐦

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2. Don't recommend it. It has some of the sloppiest world building that I have read. Nothing is properly setup. Each chapter is just a few paragraphs and the novel is written in a way that some event has to happen in this one chapter. So, the writing is very shallow. Just some random enemies pop up out of nowhere, mc has one or two cringe lines. Then he is going to kill all of them. The fight scenes are also never described as the chapters are so short. Its just says MC's people killed his enemies in different ways. Also the style of system is dumb. Like, i did read a few "fail a quest and I will end you" type of systems, but these usually give a task with a very large timeframe. So mc has a lot of freedom in terms of decisions etc. Here almost every decision is shown as a quest. Like mc is essentially a slave to his system. He doesn't even have any agency, just follows the system's instructions to the T.

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3. Mc tolol banget sih musuhnya malah dilepasin nanti baru nunggu musuh kembali ke markas untuk balas dendam kan tolol gayanya sangat sombong tapi kekuatannya lemah lo pikir legiun bintang 4 dan 5 memang kuat apalagi ada 4-5 memang bisa menang lawan puluhan ribu musuh tapi kalo lawannya jutaan mau mampus ya lo pikir setiap prajurit legiunnya sun wukong bisa ambil puluhan ribu musuh kan tolol gayanya sombong tapi kekuatan dibawahnya lemah kalo mau sombong setidaknya tentaranya sampai kek 1 sepuluh ribu baru bisa sombong minimal setiap prajurit adalah bintang 4 kan baru n tak terkalahkan

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4. mc is a slave of the system fuck

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5. Mc sampah,sombongnya minta ampun Tanpa sistem bisa apa koe heeh

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