As a Father, I Just Want to Watch You Live Forever

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1. I only have a few criticisms of the story: 1, the author is very repetitive, as well as Most people who write long stories get caught up in monotony, that is, always cultivate, protect, talk and fight.but this is normal in most stories 2 the mc starts using battle tactics like poison and etc but then it decreases as time goes by, but you can forgive him, he's becoming powerful, so yes, it's ok. 3 His wife, 100% neglected, hardly appears and there's not even a story about their meeting, etc.5 Xixi, apart from a few moments of fighting, barely has her fighting, but she uses other weapons against super weak or very strong enemies, but because of the mechanism she manages to defeat them.6 until now I don't understand where divine cultivation fits into the story, since in the beginning it even affected the emotions of those who cultivate, etc., and could control wind and rain, etc., and the MC is the author. It also seems that he doesn't know what to do with this cultivation, since it has become just a technique forgotten by the author and there is no additional ability for it, not even when the MC levels up, since with the body cultivation when the MC goes up in kingdom he gains a skill related to his body like the furnace that can purify enemies lower level than him and etc and the author forgets the skills that the mc has after 300 chapters and only focuses on 8 even though the mc has learned more and other than that he only focuses on hand-to-hand combat with fist and some white weapon like sword and etc. he doesn't remember of the mc's skills from the beginning of the story and wants to forget them and divine cultivation became a temple cultivation to simplify it seems what can do the cultivation of the 7 emotions and 6 desires 6 As the story progresses, MC learns mechanics and how to build images of the temple gods in wood. Until now, I haven't understood the meaning of building wood, since he didn't even use it much.this skill only when you are going to compete or need to level up quickly the fruits give you that, apart from that this craft is useless it only serves to resonate with the temple and having a fight against another craftsman, it might even be helpful for Xixi at some point but that's it, and apart from that he uses it more for mechanics 7 the mc has now started to show how to efficiently use his resurrection ability after 300 chapters and the painting ability over time has lost its meaning, except the world of painting and some extra skills like creating avatars of various species, but he doesn't use that, except for the last skill of creating monsters, which looks cool and he doesn't use it to nothing more than hiding and the 2 times he used it to change the place of someone from family or friends /Well, apart from that, in general the story is good/average, yes, it has a family, it has a lot of clichés, it's smart MC He knows about his weakness so he seeks to improve repeatedly in various ways. He doesn't start out strong but as time goes by he becomes very strong and starts to fight against it. beings from 3 or 4 kingdoms above even have an explanation but after 400 chapters the author forgot the secondary ability of the body fruit and only uses the basic ability quickly, the author forgot the rules he imposed on the divine cultivation of the 7th emotion and 6th desire, which is to personify it as a crying type, you cry and you can use water as a weapon Well, that's it, average work, high because there isn't much action or much character interaction and other than that the fight is mediocre at best if you want to read because of one of these, give up.read another story because this one focuses more on cultivation or tries as well as on fights and interaction with other characters he tries but doesn't achieve any of that, but I liked it so I'm going to read it

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2. admin I held great expectations for that weird theme novel. 30 years.... don't bully a young man in poverty.... where did it go?? We can set things right.

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3. Please add this novel 我乃猎魔人大师，得加钱！

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